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I've Been Chasing a Phantom. He's just a fantasy, an escape from a severed reality. His cruelty severed my heart from my soul..I shall seek him nevermore..Raven

I've Been Chasing a Phantom. He's just a fantasy, an escape from a severed reality. His cruelty severed my heart from my soul..I shall seek him nevermore..Raven

 
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Category: Secrets

 
You are better off without him. Come see me i will treat you right.
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It's Ok, Emily.
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Well, OK, that was fun!
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Raven maniac!
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i love your poetic-ness...
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You want a Scooby snack?
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Written beautifully, my dear. literature lover of the midnight moment.
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Admin, please stop posting these pathetic attempts at poetry and post actual secret.
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^Bitter much?
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Admin tell that Bozo Poetry is Fine you got no Prob with it . 2 up FU.
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you must have met me :Z hahaha
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black feathered wings babe. I love them. You are the crow that watched me walk down Faith while atop a powerline. You cawed and cawed a heckle that made me smile. My heart lit up like and I remembered how I kissed you the first time.
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Then came a rapping, tap tap tapping, twas the jerk that broke your heart. Alas, the door you shall answer for him, nevermore. Quoth your heart, forever more. Good luck.
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but you cant even be sure it is him. just saying.
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I use to really like this site and come here every day but posts like this is just ruining it. Just people making up stupid raving crap to post here that doesn't make any sense at all.
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Wouldn't an escape from a severed reality be reality? I think you want to say ?escape from reality? or ?severed reality?. Putting them together just makes a double negative, which is literally translated as a positive. That and this is just a really really bad attempt at poetry.
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^sounds like you don't have any imagination, and over analyze everything. What do you expect with 160 character limit? I think the op did a great job! so FU!
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The Twitter of Lame Poetry. Welcome to Halfpad's poetry for halfwits.
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There's a site called "Helium" better suited to this kind of post... go there for poetry and the like.
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*yawwwwnnnnnn!*.......
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^What's the matter gramps...need a nap? Don't forget to change your depends when you wake up:)
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freak.
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^Is that the best you can come up with? I think you are the halfwit on this site:)
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^3 UP. This "secret" is supposed to be exciting? You should consider getting a f***ing life where you aren't so full of yourself.
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^Maybe you should get a f***ing life as well. If you don't like to "secret" then you don't have to read or comment on it. I think you are the one that is "full" of yourself!
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^ Have a Coke and a smile and STFU.
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3^ Obviously this secret isn't supposed to be exciting moron! The woman who posted it is trying to release feelings (baggage). The way it is worded has significance to her and the man she is addressing. Alot of people use this site to release their "secrets" and let go of things so they can move on. If you don't like this post then skip over it, but you don't have to add to her pain by being mean:(
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A lot of us come to this site to release feelings because we can't do so in public. Nappy-headed half-breeds make me want to puke. However, I would never say that in person to the worthless woman carrying one around in the grocery store.
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He is married anyway loser.
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tag...you're it!
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